After reading my literacy narrative comments, by Dr. Chandler, there were many good suggestions and helpful. I read my essay, it was like a picture in my mind, from the past time, and I still remember until today.
Then I just simply added two paragraphs in the beginning and the third paragraph in the end. When it was finished I reread it and I saw the differences in my essay, how things relate to one another and how they look like without it and also my growth in the writing.
My focus was about today, it seems like the autobiography of my life. I organized everything in the order, like I made a braid and tied a bow in the end so that make sense to me who I was before and who I am today.
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